I like this page…. The first and the last panel suggest speed, while the centre of the page suggests a slow pace, you can’t run through a room full of people. But the pose of Dom shows impatience, she desperately tries to go on as fast as she can. That shows very clearly in the “close up” in panel 3
And it is easy to focus on her: she is the only one with different coloring, draws attention immediately.
Nice lay-out too, you can “fetch” this page in a jiffy.
I like this page…. The first and the last panel suggest speed, while the centre of the page suggests a slow pace, you can’t run through a room full of people. But the pose of Dom shows impatience, she desperately tries to go on as fast as she can. That shows very clearly in the “close up” in panel 3
And it is easy to focus on her: she is the only one with different coloring, draws attention immediately.
Nice lay-out too, you can “fetch” this page in a jiffy.
Thanks.